The second part of the contest will be open soon. Due to a family reunion our scheduals are a little messed up this weekend. I promise to get back on track tomorrow!
The winners are:
FIRST PLACE: (with 106 votes)
"Days Are Gone" by =
lineacurva
"These days are gone, quiet evenings being wrecked in her eyes, tears on the floor of an empty room, joy for that red kite against the sky, we’re so much older now, here we leave our shadows, delicate like wings of glass, be sure someone will envy us, for the time we managed to deserve, tomorrow would never had come, and now it’s today. so my friend rest now, close your case, just your hand. And sing with me"
SECOND PLACE: (with 99 votes)
"And They Lived Ever After" by =
Nach0o
"She grabbed the book into which we had written our souls up to this point. She said that it all had been a lie, that she hadn't meant a word she said. She grabbed the match and struck it, waiting to see my reaction. I could do nothing but watch and cry. She lit the middle page and laid it onto the floor. I watched as everything i knew and loved went to hell, its spirit rising to the sky in the form of smoke. That was the end of our story."
THIRD PLACE: (with 52 votes)
"End of Story" by ~
VomitDoll
"When it began. My heart jumped whenever I heard the melodic sound I call her voice. Nothing was better than seeing her smile. That sweet angel. The butterflies came. Angry and hungry. The static soon followed. Choking on every word I found that it was best to not breathe at all. You know its the end when you cry so much its like your tears are putting out a fire that used to fuel you."
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